الوحدة 1: Unit 1 The Law

الدرس 5Writing

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  • I can plan a four-paragraph opinion essay.
  • I can present arguments for and against a proposed driving ban.
  • I can check my writing and give feedback using the printed questions.

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Writing: You are going to write an essay expressing your opinion.20)

The car in the photograph has been stopped for driving too fast in a residential area.
The car in the photograph has been stopped for driving too fast in a residential area.20)
  1. a Should there be speed limits in areas like this? Why or why not?
  2. b What should happen to motorists who break these speed limits?
  1. Should motorists who drive too fast in residential areas be banned from driving?
  2. a Decide what your opinions are on this subject. Is your answerYes’, ‘No’ orIt depends’?
  3. b Plan your essay in four paragraphs, using the essay on the previous page as a model. Write notes under these headings:
  4. Paragraph 1 Background to the topic
  5. Paragraph 2 Arguments for
  6. Paragraph 3 Arguments against
  7. Paragraph 4 Your opinion
  1. a Use ideas you discussed in exercise 1 above. You may use expressions from the Useful Language box below.
  2. b Follow your paragraph plan and express your ideas clearly and simply. Make sure readers know what your opinion is.
  1. a Check spelling, grammar and punctuation.
  2. b Exchange essays with a partner. As you read, ask yourself these questions:
  3. Has he / she answered the question fully?
  4. Has he / she presented arguments for and against?
  5. Has he / she expressed his / her own opinions clearly?
  6. c Return your partner’s essay and exchange thoughts and ideas.
  1. In this essay I intend to look at / consider / discuss some of the arguments for and against ...
  2. First of all, I will look at / consider / discuss the arguments in favour of / against ...
  1. Motorists are obliged to / need to / must / ought to / should always ...
  1. The main point / argument for / against ...
  2. Another point / argument ...
  1. In my opinion / view, ...
  2. (In fact) it’s my view that ...
  3. I believe / think that ...
  1. Drivers need not / are not obliged to / don’thave to
  1. claim, clog up, contend,
  2. grievance,
  3. in favour of, intend,
  4. litigation, petty, regardless,
  5. residential area, speed
  6. limit, sue, supporter,
  7. ultimately

It is the spirit and not the form of law that keeps justice alive.Earl Warren20)

مثال
  1. In this essay I intend to discuss some of the arguments for and against banning motorists who drive too fast in residential areas. The question concerns both the protection of society and the way we respond when people break speed limits. My answer is that it depends on the circumstances.

  2. The main argument for a ban is the need to protect people living in these areas. Laws should help create a safe society. Supporters could argue that holding motorists accountable shows that the rules matter and that other people’s rights deserve protection.

  3. On the other hand, an argument against automatically banning every motorist is that a response should consider the individual case. Simply choosing the same outcome for everyone does not explain why that outcome is appropriate. We should discuss the circumstances rather than assume that one answer settles every case.

  4. In my opinion, protecting society must remain the main concern, but the reasons for any proposed response should be clear. I therefore favour considering each case before deciding on a ban. This position recognises the arguments on both sides while keeping safety and individual rights at the centre of the discussion. Ultimately, a clear explanation is more convincing than a punishment proposed without supporting reasons.

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الملخص

  • Answer the specific question about banning motorists who drive too fast in residential areas.
  • Plan background, arguments for, arguments against, and your opinion.
  • Write 200-220 words clearly and simply.
  • Check language and use the three peer-review questions.

الأفكار الرئيسية

  1. A clear opinion needs supporting reasons and attention to both sides.
  2. Planning, writing and checking are parts of the same task.

الأسئلة المهمة

What question must the essay answer?

Should motorists who drive too fast in residential areas be banned from driving?

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What are the four paragraph purposes?

Background to the topic; arguments for; arguments against; your opinion.

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How long should the essay be?

200-220 words.

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What should you check before exchanging essays?

Spelling, grammar and punctuation.

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What should the peer-review questions establish?

Whether the question is fully answered, both sides are presented, and the writer’s own opinion is clear.

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اختبار الدرس

أجب ثم اضغط «صحّح» لترى درجتك وتفسير كل إجابة.

سؤال 1
1

Which phrase clearly introduces your own opinion?

سهل
سؤال 2
2

What should follow the background paragraph in this task?

سهل
سؤال 3
3

Which response is explicitly allowed when deciding your position?

سهل
سؤال 4
4

Which action best follows the checking instructions?

متوسط
سؤال 5
5

The essay should present only arguments supporting your opinion.

متوسط
سؤال 6
6

Your partner should check whether your own opinion is clearly expressed.

متوسط
سؤال 7
7

Name two things to check besides spelling.

متوسط
سؤال 8
8

Why is an essay that discusses speed limits but never answers the driving-ban question incomplete?

صعب

الواجب

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سؤال 1
1

Write your own 200-220 word essay answering the printed question, using the four-paragraph plan.

صعب
سؤال 2
2

Write four headings for your essay plan in the required order.

متوسط
سؤال 3
3

Review an essay with the three questions in exercise 4 and give useful feedback.

صعب

مصطلحات الدرس

opinion
Your view on the question. Example: In my opinion / view, ...
argument
A reason for or against a position. Example: The main point / argument for / against ...
intention
What you intend to write about. Example: In this essay I intend to look at ...

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كل سؤال ونشاط وتمرين ورد في صفحات هذا الدرس، بنصه وإجابته النموذجية. 4 تمرينًا.

1The car in the photograph has been stopped for driving too fast in a residential area. Discuss these questions with a partner. a Should there be speed limits in areas like this? Why or why not? b What should happen to motorists who break these speed limits?20)شكل التمرين من الكتاب

Discuss your view on speed limits and give a reason. Propose what should happen to motorists who break them, identifying it as your opinion. The page does not print a required penalty or a speed figure.

2You are going to write an essay in answer to this question: Should motorists who drive too fast in residential areas be banned from driving? a Decide what your opinions are on this subject. Is your answerYes’, ‘No’ orIt depends’? b Plan your essay in four paragraphs, using the essay on the previous page as a model. Write notes under these headings: Paragraph 1 Background to the topic Paragraph 2 Arguments for Paragraph 3 Arguments against Paragraph 4 Your opinion20)

Choose Yes, No or It depends and plan four paragraphs: background to the topic; arguments for a ban; arguments against a ban; your opinion. Personal positions vary and should be supported.

3Write your essay in 200-220 words. a Use ideas you discussed in exercise 1 above. You may use expressions from the Useful Language box below. b Follow your paragraph plan and express your ideas clearly and simply. Make sure readers know what your opinion is.20)

Illustrative model answer, not a printed textbook passage (206 words): In this essay I intend to discuss some of the arguments for and against banning motorists who drive too fast in residential areas. The question concerns both the protection of society and the way we respond when people break speed limits. My answer is that it depends on the circumstances. The main argument for a ban is the need to protect people living in these areas. Laws should help create a safe society. Supporters could argue that holding motorists accountable shows that the rules matter and that other people’s rights deserve protection. On the other hand, an argument against automatically banning every motorist is that a response should consider the individual case. Simply choosing the same outcome for everyone does not explain why that outcome is appropriate. We should discuss the circumstances rather than assume that one answer settles every case. In my opinion, protecting society must remain the main concern, but the reasons for any proposed response should be clear. I therefore favour considering each case before deciding on a ban. This position recognises the arguments on both sides while keeping safety and individual rights at the centre of the discussion. Ultimately, a clear explanation is more convincing than a punishment proposed without supporting reasons.

4When you have finished writing, read your essay carefully. a Check spelling, grammar and punctuation. b Exchange essays with a partner. As you read, ask yourself these questions: Has he / she answered the question fully? Has he / she presented arguments for and against? Has he / she expressed his / her own opinions clearly? c Return your partner’s essay and exchange thoughts and ideas.20)

Check spelling, grammar and punctuation. Review whether the essay answers the question fully, gives arguments on both sides and clearly expresses the writer’s opinion. Return it and discuss specific feedback; the feedback depends on the essay actually written.

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  • ص 20: «It is the spirit and not the form of law that keeps justice alive.»